Your Poem Is Epic.. Do You Think I Can Be as Good As You? Here’s my poem.
Looking At The Sky, Are There Any Stars Left? Streetlights Glitter, But The Stars, They’re Gone. My Heart is Whisked Away With The Winds That Are Howling At My Windows “Let Me In…” And I Do. Falling To The Ground, Asleep. The Moon Isn’t Even Here. An Empty Night Sky Stares At Me, It’s Beautiful, If I Could Lay In The Grass And Stare Into Nothing. Pitch Black. I Would. I Can Only Dream Of Such, Staring From What Seems L
Hey guys, I must say, I do love the vid. And as well, I just recently started a youtube channel and I only have one poem vid so far, I don’t think its too shabby for a first vid. If Ido say so my self ;P please check it out if your interested (P.S, Not all my poems will be sad, and not all my vids will be poems, some piano, some rap ) I’ll be waiting for visitors on by channel, lol byee!!
You have been visited by Dr.Seuss, the cat in the hat, he will grant you one wish, make the wish when the countdown is over 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 MAKE A WISH!!!! post this to 10 videos and your wish will come true
YOU FUCKING SAD PEOPLE !! SITTING BEHIND CLOSED DOORS CRYING !! GET THE FUCK OUT !! THERE ARE MILLIONS AND MOLLIONS OF MEN AND WOMEN !! TO MEET .SHE/HE WAS NOT THE ONE !! STOP FUCKING WHIMPING ABOUT IT !! . MONEY? I DO NOT EARN THOUSANDS A MONTH BUT I AM HAPPIEST OF AAL OF YOU BECAUSE I LIVE FOR WHAT I HAVE TODAY ! FOR NOT WHAT I HAD ! OR DID NOT HAVE !! just today.
Girl you left mi heart broken.
you always got me hoping.
i want you to come back.
but thats not gonna happen thats a fact.
now im smoken a sack .
trying to forget the past.
i miss the way you laugh.
your smile your hugs your kisses.
what i really need are a few wishes.
to win you back .
promise i won’t do the same.
i miss it when you say my name.
promise ill never hurt you.
im always thinking of you.
baby this poem is for you
but i dont wanna say good bye to him hes my life i cant live with out him! and to have my mom and dad say i am not aloud to b with him….. or talk to him i cry everyday knowing that ;( i miss himm like crazy i want him with me i wanna be in his life i wanna b with him for a while! hes everything ill need i can relate to him h shows me how to be myself and not to b affraid and that if i show people who i really am …… phil cooney i miss u goddamnit i love you soo mich!!
Poetry from the Greek 'poiesis'/ποίησις is a making,forming, creating, or the art of poetry, or a poem) is a form of literary art in which language is used for its aesthetic and evocative qualities in addition to, or in lieu of, its apparent meaning. Poetry may be written independently, as discrete poems or, may occur in conjunction with other arts, as in poetic drama, hymns, lyrics, or prose poetry. It is published in dedicated magazines the longest established being Poetry and Oxford Poetry, individual collections and wider anthologies.
December 2nd, 2011 - 19:54
Well. 3/4 of it was cut off.
December 2nd, 2011 - 20:01
Your Poem Is Epic.. Do You Think I Can Be as Good As You? Here’s my poem.
Looking At The Sky, Are There Any Stars Left? Streetlights Glitter, But The Stars, They’re Gone. My Heart is Whisked Away With The Winds That Are Howling At My Windows “Let Me In…” And I Do. Falling To The Ground, Asleep. The Moon Isn’t Even Here. An Empty Night Sky Stares At Me, It’s Beautiful, If I Could Lay In The Grass And Stare Into Nothing. Pitch Black. I Would. I Can Only Dream Of Such, Staring From What Seems L
December 2nd, 2011 - 20:59
Hey guys, I must say, I do love the vid. And as well, I just recently started a youtube channel and I only have one poem vid so far, I don’t think its too shabby for a first vid. If Ido say so my self ;P please check it out if your interested
(P.S, Not all my poems will be sad, and not all my vids will be poems, some piano, some rap 
) I’ll be waiting for visitors on by channel, lol byee!! 
December 2nd, 2011 - 21:34
You have been visited by Dr.Seuss, the cat in the hat, he will grant you one wish, make the wish when the countdown is over 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 MAKE A WISH!!!! post this to 10 videos and your wish will come true
December 2nd, 2011 - 22:14
story of my life…
December 2nd, 2011 - 22:48
” So lovely for nice memory….
December 2nd, 2011 - 23:04
This song is amazing
December 2nd, 2011 - 23:42
i know this feelings.. i couldn’t stop crying..
December 3rd, 2011 - 00:00
YOU FUCKING SAD PEOPLE !! SITTING BEHIND CLOSED DOORS CRYING !! GET THE FUCK OUT !! THERE ARE MILLIONS AND MOLLIONS OF MEN AND WOMEN !! TO MEET .SHE/HE WAS NOT THE ONE !! STOP FUCKING WHIMPING ABOUT IT !! . MONEY? I DO NOT EARN THOUSANDS A MONTH BUT I AM HAPPIEST OF AAL OF YOU BECAUSE I LIVE FOR WHAT I HAVE TODAY ! FOR NOT WHAT I HAD ! OR DID NOT HAVE !! just today.
December 3rd, 2011 - 00:13
Girl you left mi heart broken.
you always got me hoping.
i want you to come back.
but thats not gonna happen thats a fact.
now im smoken a sack .
trying to forget the past.
i miss the way you laugh.
your smile your hugs your kisses.
what i really need are a few wishes.
to win you back .
promise i won’t do the same.
i miss it when you say my name.
promise ill never hurt you.
im always thinking of you.
baby this poem is for you
December 3rd, 2011 - 00:57
True…its called ” True Love” ..reminds me of my hopeless life, and broken heart…
December 3rd, 2011 - 01:55
that poem was sad and good at the same time i started to cry a little
December 3rd, 2011 - 02:30
This is so touching I can relate to this omg I hate having those feelings
December 3rd, 2011 - 03:20
This poem is deeper than ever
December 3rd, 2011 - 03:46
@bloodsuckindramqueen pretty gud
December 3rd, 2011 - 04:02
i didnt make it i cried
December 3rd, 2011 - 04:12
Ooooh I feel the sadness deep in my heart…
Oh, shit wait is this – yup it’s a heart attack
I’m just too fat… anyone know some good bypass specialist?
December 3rd, 2011 - 04:38
Aww dat is so sadd!
December 3rd, 2011 - 04:40
Woow the poem & song was quite enjoyable ;P
December 3rd, 2011 - 05:32
nyce
December 3rd, 2011 - 06:16
@bloodsuckindramqueen thts very pretty
December 3rd, 2011 - 07:03
but i dont wanna say good bye to him hes my life i cant live with out him! and to have my mom and dad say i am not aloud to b with him….. or talk to him i cry everyday knowing that ;( i miss himm like crazy i want him with me i wanna be in his life i wanna b with him for a while! hes everything ill need i can relate to him h shows me how to be myself and not to b affraid and that if i show people who i really am …… phil cooney i miss u goddamnit i love you soo mich!!
December 3rd, 2011 - 07:42
@bloodsuckindramqueen wowwwwwwww superb
December 3rd, 2011 - 08:05
That’s a very passionate outpouring. I guess it helped you feel better.
If this is your first go at writing a poem it’s not bad. Obviously it’s popular with most of the people who have read it.
I believe you should change the lines that are straight out of a song though. Either that or acknowledge the source.
Have you written more poetry? Do you like to read poetry? I’m hoping you’re a long term member of the unofficial poetry lovers club (-:
December 3rd, 2011 - 08:11
I LOVE IT BUT IT MADE ME SAD( JOHN M ) I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU!!